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Friday, April 4, 2008

Mr. Dave, The Punishment Guy



In the morning of the most beautiful city of the World, HCM City. And in AIS, American International School, there is a Tall Guy. Everyone called him, Mr. Dave.
One day, Mr. Dave was walking on the 4th floor, he heard something!!!! That was Henry; he was speaking Vietnamese a lot. Mr. Dave heard some VN words. Yeah, and then he caught him to the Detention Club. The First 7 Grader has come to Detention for Mr. Dave!! Outside, we could hear Mr. Dave shouted really loud: “This is AIS, American, why could you speak out Vietnamese Words, now goes to Ms. Josephine room on the library and write for me a report about what you did 10 times.” Henry was really sad, he went to the library. After that a while, he still can heard some of VN words again. This time was from Jimmy, he spoke out many words to Mike’s face, and Mike spoke back with VN words, too. Now this time was those 2 guys. He caught them to the detention club, too. He was really angry that why this is AIS and there are many of bad habits of speaking VN. After angry, now he WAS upset with them. He though the 7 grade was the best of all the grades. But now there are 3 over 21 were not paying attention to the rules. Too hopeless, he came to his detention room, “Hi Mr. Dave,” Jimmy and Mike said together. Mr. Dave was shock, he saw those two guys with their smile, like they are really funny! He wanted to shout at them, but after all, he started to calm down. He said: “All of you guys are good students at AIS, that’s why your parents have sent you here. And now, look what you have done! You guys have taken all of your parents’ work and money, and you guys through them to the rubbish can. Man you guys are so…”
“Mr. Dave~~ I finished my report. It’s easy man.” Henry said and smile.
“Shut Up all of you guys” Mr. Dave yelled with angry and went out of the room immediately!
“Oh Men, what have we done?” said Henry with stunned face.
“I don’t know.” replied Jimmy.
“Maybe his mother called him for his party.” Mike said and laughed.
“Yeah, maybe he came home for his wedding.” Henry said.
Then they began to laugh harder and harder. Been a while, Mr. Dave came back.
“Shhhh! Mr. Dave is coming back; shut all the vietnamese up everyone.” Henry said.
Mr. Dave came with a coffee, “Sorry, did I hear something?”
“Yes,” Henry smiled, “That’s from Mike and Jimmy! Not me again.”
“Oh men! I was trying to forgive you guys. But you guy all use that for teasing me.”
“We’re sorry, we are all bad students.” 3 of them replied at the same time.
“Each of you, come to my secret room, I have a suspire for each.”
“So…Who will go first? Jimmy? You are the tallest!” said Mike
“OK! I will come first. Let’s see what is suspires.”
Then, Jimmy came in. and after 30 minutes, he came out with tears.
“What zup? What did he do?” Asked Henry with nervous face.
“Nothing.” He laughed, “Just a little suspires.”
“So who will be next?” Mike asked nervously.
“OK! I’m a brave man! I WILL COME!” said Henry.
“Thanks, Henry.”
After a while, Henry came out. Mike asked the same at the last time and Henry replied the same as Jimmy. “That’s your turn, good luck.” said Henry.
Then Mike came in. Mr. Dave was waiting for him, with no shirt. “OK! Now come to the stage with me, you will see the suspires.”
Mike came into the stage. “Hey YOOOO! Watch out baby!” yelled Mr. Dave.
“Sax! What the…?” He saw Mr. Dave jumped from the column of the stage and smashed Mike!
“Ouch! What the...?” Mike yelled!
Then, Mr. Dave continued wrestling him like in SMACKDOWN. (that’s not real)
After that, Mike crawled out of the Detention Club. He ran out slowly because of hurt.
“Good Luck Chuck!” Mr. Dave yelled in the Detention Club.
Then, Mike ran to 4th floor to see Jimmy and Henry.
“Why all you guys said it was nothing hurt!” Mike yelled.
“Because Mr. Dave said if we said it, we will get into trouble again. Man, it’s horrible.” Jimmy said.
“Yeah it is.” Henry and Mike said.
After that, they told for hold school knew that, some of them believed, some of them didn’t. And of course, they must in some big problem with the Detention Club.
By Ricky
Grade 7

6 comments:

Mr.Sak+Sua said...

Sak sua = GOOD

HäÇk€rHide said...

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bookgirl said...

LOL like ur stiry... funny

TheDylans said...

what does it mean LOL anyway?

Khanh Van said...

Oh!!! GUD

Tue said...

It's a little violent, I think.